Analysis of Directing Scene from Man and Superman

I'm taking Directing I this semester, and during the first quarter we auditioned, cast, rehearsed, and presented short scenes from various plays. We were assigned to write 5-6 page reviews of our scenes and getting to the point of performance, and I thought I might as well cross-post my assignment to LJ in lieu of any other sort of update. All mentions of "you" refer to my teacher, who sat in on part of one rehearsal.

( Also I snipped a brief passage which might have been too personal, who knows. )